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Saturday 11 July 2009

tHe FirSt SkEtCh....

Wednesday,9/7/2009
The welcoming nite
has ended...
remarked my first directed sketch has reach its middle of its plot..
to tell the truth..
my ownself actually

couldnt believe i can reach so far...
couldnt believe i can write out the story
couldnt believe i can think the plot
couldnt believe i can choose the actors and actress
couldnt believe i can work out so good with them
couldnt believe i can think out and do those costumes and props
couldnt believe i can direct the situation so smoothly
so so many...i couldnt believe...
but i believe that my direction is correct
and what i need to do is play freely within the rules of my direction
as long that i still within the boundaries of my direction
i am safe to go crazy and high...haha

may be the time in the future i look back here,
i might lost the memories about the first sketch which i turn it from the words on the paper to the drama on the stage..
now i plan to write the story here

the story begins with...

A high ranked government officer,Johny who is rich and quite powerful. During his work, he is very greedy and dishonest officer. He usually likes to receive and gives bribes to make his work easier and have additional income. But, he managed to do all of his dishonest actions without being caught and is able to clean the ‘dirt’ of his actions. Besides that, he also enjoy himself by going clubbing and playing games. He always busy on his own schedule until forgot to arrange time for his family. As a result, he always quarrel with his family and he feels that both of his parents are burdens for him. when his parents trying to advise him, he will feel that his parents are nagging at him, so he will fiercely fight back and scold at them.

As time goes by, Johny still does not want to stop doing the dishonest and evil actions. But, one day, his day turned into one of his worst day. As he is trying to asking and receiving for bribes, he did not know that his actions being watch by BPR. As he is going to leave after receiving the bribes, BPR sprang out and catch him. He is stunned and cant do anything.

As a high rank government officer, it is very serious if one being caught dishonest in doing his responsibilities. So, for Johny, he took to the magistrate court and then he is found guilty. Because he did many dishonest acts while doing his responsibilities, he is being slapped by a death penalty which is “body tear up by 5 horses”. He will stay in jail while waiting for his deadly sentence.

While waiting for his death, he lives in fear and sorrow. He feels very regret of his past evil actions. His parents visit him everyday and always encourage him to be more brave to face the greatest challenge ahead. He saw his parent still take care of him eventhough he always treat them ill. The tears of regret flow from the inner heart of Johny. From his mouth, came out the words, “mama, papa, I love you”. All three of the family hugged together and cried together.

One night, Johny suddenly reflect back during the time when he was in university. He remembers that he walking into a class where there are a group of people. There is a committee named Go Ask Him approached him and persuade him to join the hand expression dance.
( hand expression starts…)

A friend of Johny introduces Johny to play computer games. Johny starts to become more and more addicted to those games. When UBF committee try to persuade him to come. He start to make the committee life hard. But he at last attend the games session but reaches late because of playing computer games.

(games session starts..)

The other friend takes Johny go clubs for clubbing. Johny become more and more enjoying his life. After try once, he becomes obsessed with the feeling and wants to go there some more. The UBF committee need to be more hard to persuade him to attend. Johny tried to brush away the committee and scold the committee.

Johny cries as he feels regret for missed the chance to join and enjoy with the group. In his life, he has never met such a sincere group before. Additionally he does not believe there have such a group in the society today. He also feel regret because he mistakenly follows the wrong way which lead him to what he becoming now.


The day of death sentence reaches. Johny with very disturbed emotions ( scared, sad, etc) while being taken to the punishment place. When the Penalty officer throws the punishment stick to indicate the start of punishment, Johny screams, shouts, cries and 'meronta-ronta' while the process of the punishment is going on.
- His head is being tied to horse 1 “ Entertainments ” .
- His left hand is tied to horse 2 “ Educations”
- His right hand is tied to horse 3 “ Personal love gf/bf ”
- His left leg is tied to horse 4 “ Families ”
- His right leg is tied to horse 5 “ Job ”

As the horses begin to walk and the ropes becoming more and more tight, Johny becomes more and more scared. He really hopes that there will be a people come and save him. He closes his eyes and shouts painfully…

(to be continued)
the end of part 1


in this very part 1,
i try to bring out the real university environments to show the new comers
from my way, i try to get closer to my audience
people likes what they likes
people likes to have funny things so i added the funny elements
people might ask why i put DOTA and Clubbing in my sketch
they might be thinking y a buddhist club become like promoting people to those unhealthy lifestyle

my personal reasons are we DO NOT promote those lifestyle, we SHOW OUT that happen around us during our U life here.. PROMOTE and SHOW both are very different things.
after i show out, i bring them to see what will happen when they chooses to against activities which can develope the qualities of innerself. What will happen when they gone extreme inside those unhealthy lifestyle.. Yes, those computer games and clubbing are definitely fun than Buddhist fellowships' hand expression dance and hymns..that is when we see it in 'short sighted' and ignorance. When we wear our 'glasses' and 'telescope' to see more clearly, the different things came out... the realness between these two groups shown very clearly..the real cetak rompak shown very clearly..one is show us about the meaning of life while the other show us the fake happiness of life..what would u choose??

"body tear out with five horses"
may be you might want to know y i choose this so called death penalty..
the reasons are
1. easy to act...lol
2. many people couldnt guess this death penalty..many would guess hang to death, shoot to death and etc..haha..purposely make u all 'za dao'
3. actually, the main reason behind it is in our life, there are 5 most important things in our life. JoB, Family, Entertainment, Personal Love and Education.. these five groups i classified them as the death sentence horses..if we couldnt take care well of those horses, it is very same like being killed by the death sentences..it served as a warning to us to take care our life well...

before i end my sharing here 2day,
i shall not forget the most funny element i added in my sketch
the 'gardenia roti' which the mother brings for johny when she visited him in the jail..the scene is a sad scene but i added an unpredictable bomb to make my audience become 'za dao' along the sad but heart tickling music..haha..

k la...until here la my sharing 2day..very fun very fun...i really feel like i become Director Zhang YiMou who directed the unpredictable opening ceremony of Beijing Olympics.haha..not bad not bad,senz...jia you..yeah!!!

1 comments:

圆圆 said...

i always believe in you :)